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[B-Zone TV] Together,Forever


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Clip title: Together,Forever
Gender: Love Story
Date: 28/09/2014
Brief Introduction: In this story there are two Lovers who love each other and decides to leave their houses but the shocking thing was that her father was a COP. Watch Video if you want to know the full story.

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Her father was cop? You didn't show that and why cops are tracking this lovers? You need to show this in video.

The sound is awful, I see something and hear another thing.

First video was likely from my perspective.

Use 'smooth camera', camhack is good only for fix frames.

'Gender' is action, not 'male'. Movie gender, not yours.

Edited by paulyks
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Her father was cop? You didn't show that and why cops are tracking this lovers? You need to show this in video.

The sound is awful, I see something and hear another thing.

First video was likely from my perspective.

Use 'smooth camera', camhack is good only for fix frames.

'Gender' is action, not 'male'. Movie gender, not yours.

 

There's a need to show that? X_X and it's easy to know that why cops were trying to get them because that guy was taking her daughter to be with her forever without her father's permission. :-J and the second point. Yes sound is little bit awful because it's in hindi and i didn't edit audio as it need to be done.

Thanks for the mistakes.I will keep these mistakes on my mind before making my next video.

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Great video and awesome story ;) +1 without thinking .

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